New poem:Broken(by me) :)

I decided to make another poem last night. Just to see how well I can put together a little flow. And I think it is pretty good. Only thing is the end is a little shaky just because I had a hard time trying to figure out how to end it. Since I don't really write poems. But here is what I wrote.Its called broken.
BROKEN

Broken into pieces
my hearts not beating
sick of being feed by these lies
so I stop eating.
The world goes around
but I feel like I'm going down
lost under the little lies
that try to keep me around.
I stay close for now
but one day I'm going out.
Breaking loose of the crowd
that's been holding me down
finding away to the top
I aint eva gona stop
my grind is on a lock
and I'm om a clock
that ticks away as my heart slowly stops
down memory lane my heart starts to change
picking up all he lost game
that I thought was lame.
But it's not the same.
It's the new truth that's taking me down a path
that can't change the past
but it helps me fast
To become something that I thought wouldn't last
but now I got a token
and I'm really not jokin
cuz guess what?
I'm...
UNBROKEN